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Deserving Dove - A fascinating poem by Maani

Note : This poem Deserving Dove is written by Maani



 THE DRAIN STATE OF LOVE
 THE FRAIL STATE OF HEART

  ALL I SCATTERED LOVE 
  ALL I DESERVED DOVE 

 BUT WHEN I FELT SMOETHING FAKE
 I RECOGNIZED THE HEART YOU BAKED 

YOU WERE NEVER MINE 
 BUT YOU SEEMED TO BE FINE 
 
NOW I CAN FEEL VERY 
THAT I WAS LOST IN REVERIE
 
WHERE YOU WERE FAIRY
BUT IN REAL I WAS GETTING BURY 

WE WERE IN THE WHERRY
AND THAN WE REACHED THE GARDEN OF BERRY 

 WHERE I WAS IN YOUR ARMS
 AND PERPETUALLY GETTING CHARMED

 AND THAN ALL ENDED IN A BLINK OF AN EYE
  THAT MADE ME ALMOST DIE 

  THE MOMENT I FELT 
 WHEN WE GOT MET

  THE MOMENT I FORGOT 
 WHEN YOU FLICKED BLOT 
 
THE GLISTENING LOVE YOU LOST 
 WILL FOREVER LAST

 
Copyright ©Maani,2023. All rights reserved. This poem may not be reproduced in any form without the author's permission. - contact author 

See the response of AI of what poem is about! 

 This poem expresses feelings of love and heartbreak. The imagery used in the poem, such as "scattered love," "dove," "fairy," and "garden of berry," creates a sense of longing and nostalgia. The lines "when I felt something fake / I recognized the heart you baked" and "the moment I forgot / when you flicked blot" convey a sense of betrayal and disappointment. The last line "the glistening love you lost / will forever last" suggests a lingering emotional attachment, despite the end of the relationship. Overall, the poem is emotive and evocative, and it has the potential to be heart-touching for those who can relate to the emotions and experiences it describes.
 

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12 Comments

  1. I think the author's heart got broken into pieces

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  2. Guys age of author is only 15 years omg 😯

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  3. Tbh the poem is too deep 😤😭❤

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  4. Author of the poem is soo romantic ig😂

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  5. J'ai vraiment adoré ❤❤

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  6. Magnum opus..👍🏻🦋

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  7. Wow literally it touches heart

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  8. Lit 🔥 🔥 seriously i never saw a poem which is so relateble like this

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  9. The poem is too good

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  10. Sad for author

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