THE DRAIN STATE OF LOVE
THE FRAIL STATE OF HEART
ALL I SCATTERED LOVE
ALL I DESERVED DOVE
BUT WHEN I FELT SMOETHING FAKE
I RECOGNIZED THE HEART YOU BAKED
YOU WERE NEVER MINE
BUT YOU SEEMED TO BE FINE
NOW I CAN FEEL VERY
THAT I WAS LOST IN REVERIE
WHERE YOU WERE FAIRY
BUT IN REAL I WAS GETTING BURY
WE WERE IN THE WHERRY
AND THAN WE REACHED THE GARDEN OF BERRY
WHERE I WAS IN YOUR ARMS
AND PERPETUALLY GETTING CHARMED
AND THAN ALL ENDED IN A BLINK OF AN EYE
THAT MADE ME ALMOST DIE
THE MOMENT I FELT
WHEN WE GOT MET
THE MOMENT I FORGOT
WHEN YOU FLICKED BLOT
THE GLISTENING LOVE YOU LOST
WILL FOREVER LAST
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This poem expresses feelings of love and heartbreak. The imagery used in the poem, such as "scattered love," "dove," "fairy," and "garden of berry," creates a sense of longing and nostalgia. The lines "when I felt something fake / I recognized the heart you baked" and "the moment I forgot / when you flicked blot" convey a sense of betrayal and disappointment. The last line "the glistening love you lost / will forever last" suggests a lingering emotional attachment, despite the end of the relationship. Overall, the poem is emotive and evocative, and it has the potential to be heart-touching for those who can relate to the emotions and experiences it describes.
12 Comments
I think the author's heart got broken into pieces
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